@ fallingstar2008 its so hard! like i have ideas for the story and i forget it because it was all on my laptop plus my computer at home goes slower than a snail :c however, thank you so much <3 ill update asap
Thank you for updating! Hope your laptop is up and running, I have no idea how I would survive without my laptop. Awesome chapter, can't wait to read the next one! :)
@ fallingstar2008 aww! thank you! :) updates will be slow because my laptop broke but I am using my school one as a resource c: thank you again <2 xoxoxo
Wow! I never expected that! But I like how you made the fact that Bert and Joseph's father is an army general play a part in the story. Or did Joseph forge Bert's army application?
@ Chloe_McCrackhead well, maybe Bert could be sugar and spice and everything nice!! XD lmao c: I'm so inspired to see people like you take such an interest and comment like this c: Even if it is predictions, it could or could not happen. It really gives me amazing feedback Thank you so much c:
OK, I predict that Gerard didn't kill his father, but one of his "personalities" is a murderer and he attempts to murder Bert. (I hope it's just an attempt if I'm right!) I also feel that Bert isn't all that he seems. I mean, something must have happened for Joseph to hate him so much. I know that some people don't like each other naturally, but family is family. I could be horribly wrong, but that is what I think will happen.
Why aren't there any comments yet? I just read all of this in like, 5 mins, and it was really good! I wasn't expected Bert to be a love interest for Lyn-Z, but now I know there's gonna be an awesome yet annoying love triangle involved later on! ;D Hmmm, I kinda can't wait to see Gerard's different personalities, and how Lyn-Z deals with it. I think by the end of the story we could see a 'killer' personality that will eventually take on Bert and try to kill him. Anyway, I'm predicting too far into the story. Please update soooon! Subscribing.
March 22nd, 2013 at 03:18pm
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