It's Not All What It Seems... - Comments

  • negative_creep

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    Hey guys! If yall are still here after these years... The story is being updated! :)
    October 14th, 2020 at 10:50am
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    @ fallingstar2008
    its so hard! like i have ideas for the story and i forget it because it was all on my laptop plus my computer at home goes slower than a snail :c however, thank you so much <3 ill update asap
    July 25th, 2013 at 05:11am
  • fallingstar2008

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    Thank you for updating! Hope your laptop is up and running, I have no idea how I would survive without my laptop. Awesome chapter, can't wait to read the next one! :)
    July 24th, 2013 at 04:59pm
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    @ fallingstar2008
    aww! thank you! :) updates will be slow because my laptop broke but I am using my school one as a resource c: thank you again <2 xoxoxo
    April 18th, 2013 at 05:35pm
  • fallingstar2008

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    Great story, awesome chapter. Can't wait to read the next one :)
    April 15th, 2013 at 11:22pm
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    @ Chloe_McCrackhead
    stay updated c:
    April 13th, 2013 at 08:54pm
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    Wow! I never expected that! But I like how you made the fact that Bert and Joseph's father is an army general play a part in the story. Or did Joseph forge Bert's army application?
    April 5th, 2013 at 09:08pm
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    @ Chloe_McCrackhead
    well, maybe Bert could be sugar and spice and everything nice!! XD lmao c:
    I'm so inspired to see people like you take such an interest and comment like this c:
    Even if it is predictions, it could or could not happen. It really gives me amazing feedback
    Thank you so much c: Very Happy Smile Very Happy Smile Very Happy Smile Very Happy Smile
    April 4th, 2013 at 10:34pm
  • Chloe_McCrackhead

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    OK, I predict that Gerard didn't kill his father, but one of his "personalities" is a murderer and he attempts to murder Bert. (I hope it's just an attempt if I'm right!) I also feel that Bert isn't all that he seems. I mean, something must have happened for Joseph to hate him so much. I know that some people don't like each other naturally, but family is family. I could be horribly wrong, but that is what I think will happen.
    April 4th, 2013 at 10:22pm
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    @Fanfic_Addict
    Thank you! c:
    I update like every day c:
    April 4th, 2013 at 05:15am
  • Fanfic_Addict

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    i love it
    March 30th, 2013 at 03:00am
  • negative_creep

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    i did it was terribke :( im so sad!
    March 24th, 2013 at 02:45am
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    @ hellohhkatiex3
    Yay! Can't wait :) You've probably heard about the split now though.... so heartbroken.. </3
    March 23rd, 2013 at 01:35pm
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    @ KilljoyBekah
    I will! thanks c: this really made my day c: and maybe, maybe not! hehehe c: ill be posting new chapter(s) tonight c:
    March 22nd, 2013 at 11:52pm
  • KilljoyBekah

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    Why aren't there any comments yet? I just read all of this in like, 5 mins, and it was really good! I wasn't expected Bert to be a love interest for Lyn-Z, but now I know there's gonna be an awesome yet annoying love triangle involved later on! ;D Hmmm, I kinda can't wait to see Gerard's different personalities, and how Lyn-Z deals with it. I think by the end of the story we could see a 'killer' personality that will eventually take on Bert and try to kill him. Anyway, I'm predicting too far into the story. Please update soooon! Subscribing.
    March 22nd, 2013 at 03:18pm