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  • Alice Verney

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    Holy crap poor becca and I agree with the previous comment
    October 9th, 2013 at 01:45am
  • Sailorroxy

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    While I do like the story I feel it is somewhat lacking. For example you could add a note to the chapter so the reader knows who is narrating. Also I am in some heavey need of back story.
    September 4th, 2013 at 01:49am
  • dontPanic!itsadisco

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    Can Brendon Urie come to the wedding? Pleaseeeeee??? I miss him haha XD Great job guys! Still love it! :)
    June 12th, 2013 at 12:39am
  • dontPanic!itsadisco

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    Can Brendon Urie come to the wedding? Pleaseeeeee??? I miss him haha XD Great job guys! Still love it! :)
    June 12th, 2013 at 12:39am
  • dontPanic!itsadisco

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    AHHHHHHHOHMIFUCKINGGAWDSEQUEL!!!!

    THIS IS THE BEST DAY EVER I CANNOT CONTAIN THE FEELS!!!

    IM SO EXCITED I'VE MISSED THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!

    I THINK IM FANGIRLING MORE THAN EVERY TWILIGHT AND HARRY POTTER FAN COMBINED

    WHAT IS AIR?!
    March 18th, 2013 at 02:05am
  • hannahsings9752

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    OMFGYAYYAYYAYWOOOOSEQUELWOOWOOOOADSFFGHHJLL

    I AM SO EXCITED FOR THIS OMFG

    I CAN'T EVEN

    IM SPEECHLESS
    March 18th, 2013 at 01:59am
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