it's cool there's probably loads of mistakes in mine lol March 28th, 2013 at 01:43am
it's cool there's probably loads of mistakes in mine lol A Human and a Cyborg? Never! - Comments
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it's cool there's probably loads of mistakes in mine lol
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@ missinvisible2013
Oh my God! I don't know how I did that D: I'll fix it as soon as I can.March 28th, 2013 at 01:36am -
Nice update! The only mistake I can see is near the end where you wrote 'She opened her mouth and spoke, the spoke, coming out ... Think you meant to put speech or words :)March 27th, 2013 at 10:38pm
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March 23rd, 2013 at 03:36pm
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@ missinvisible2013
Thanks. It was a little short, but I'm working to make the updates a little longer.March 23rd, 2013 at 03:33pm -
Still loving this that update was really good :)March 23rd, 2013 at 02:13am
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You're welcome :)March 20th, 2013 at 03:24am
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@ missinvisible2013
Hehe ok thanks.
March 20th, 2013 at 03:22am -
It's not problem I'll check out your other stuff tomorrow :) March 20th, 2013 at 03:21am -
@ missinvisible2013
Thanks so much for reading this. It means a lot. :)March 20th, 2013 at 03:20am -
Wow I'm loving this! Even with just reading the prologue I'm intrigued :) can't wait to read more :) *Subscribed and recommended*March 20th, 2013 at 03:09am
