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  • JustShrugAtlas

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    I think this adorable. I've been reading fanfics for so long that this is refreshing. I hope you find some inspiration soon. :)
    March 27th, 2013 at 03:09am
  • a mimosa pudica

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    Even though you're uninspired, I hope you feel inspired with this one small comment. It's small and useless to few but hopefully this might mean something to you.

    I absolutely love this story, I am loving it more and more after each chapter I read. The last chapter you've updated (Chapter 4), I really couldn't believe she kissed him and APOLOGIZED. I mean, I know that it would have been an embarrassing moment but WHY?

    Anyways, I'm cheering you on for the next chapter. It will surely be as awesome as the last one. Arms
    March 24th, 2013 at 05:23pm
  • swell

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    I have to say, that after reading only one chapter so far I love this. Micah is such an interesting character and I love how relatable yet sarcastic she is. Casey seems cool too despite his confidence, but he's also interesting and I love their interactions together. Reading the second chapter, I found it intriguing that the two have formed a strong friendship rather than a relationship, but even so it'd be lovely to see if these two ever make a relationship work. Casey is such a carefree guy and I think he matches Micah's realistic personality perfectly.

    OMG AND CAN I JUST AGREE WITH MICAH THAT I ALSO SHIPPED ELLIOT AND OLIVIA HERE, I mean yeah Stabler had his own fam fam but those two were the BEST pair out and to break them off was just so unnecessary.

    And now I'm off to read the last chapter but I have to say that I am loving this so far! Subscribing and recc'ing for sure :)
    March 24th, 2013 at 08:23am
  • PamelaJaneF

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    Loved it! Please update soon :)
    Also, I love your writing style.
    March 20th, 2013 at 09:00pm
  • megpie12

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    Love it! Can't wait for more! :)
    March 20th, 2013 at 05:52am
  • Gred-and-Forge

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    Really wish I could just do that, great update.
    March 19th, 2013 at 10:41pm
  • Gred-and-Forge

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    Aw this was sooo cute! Please update again reaaaaaally soon :)
    March 19th, 2013 at 06:26pm
  • a mimosa pudica

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    I love Casey. Huhu, can he go with her? Pleeeeeeeaaaaase?
    March 19th, 2013 at 12:50pm
  • Sansa Stark

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    I just saw this on the stories pages and the description caught my attention. Although I usually shy away from high school stories, this one seems different. I absolutely love Mica and I have a good feeling about this story. Keep it up!
    March 19th, 2013 at 03:58am
  • a mimosa pudica

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    I love sarcastic people and romance fixed in together. I can already see myself blushing and laughing at the same time in the next chapter.

    Please update! I will definitely be subscribed to this story.
    March 18th, 2013 at 12:56pm
  • a mimosa pudica

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    I love sarcastic people and romance fixed in together. I can already see myself blushing and laughing at the same time in the next chapter.

    Please update! I will definitely be subscribed to this story.
    March 18th, 2013 at 12:56pm
  • mastermak911

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    Your narrative is great, but be careful of rambling. It's hard to keep clear of that especially in the first person voice. Your character introductions are superb. Overall, I'm impressed. You just got a subscriber!

    Quick question.... A Freshman taking AP Literature and Composition? Really?
    March 18th, 2013 at 08:29am
  • kjoseph

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    I haven't been on this site in ages, and I must say I was glad to find that the first thing I saw was your story. I love it. :)
    March 18th, 2013 at 07:32am