Going Under - Comments

Read both of these in like three hours. I really hope the story rekindles.

Please update!!

In withdrawal :(

Sorry for not commenting.. I have an excuse though! :D School. I wrote a course test every week for six months straight. Once I even wrote two in one week! talk about horror and then when I finally got the time to relax I found a reeeeeally good book to read, you know Graceling? By Kristin Cashore? It's AWESOME! :D ... uh, back to my comment:
Austin, Austin, Austin.. I'm starting to like you. Serves him right to feel guilty but Ray has already forgiven them both so he should move on. I recommend a talk with Ray. His problem could be solved rather quickly in comparison to the others.. :) I CAN'T WAIT FOR PARKERS CHAPTER!! :DDD

Damn, poor Austin:/ I think he needs to just talk it out with Kassi, Ray & Kassi figured it out & now Austin & Kassi need to have a talk to get everything out there:) GAAAH, poor Kassi tho:/ like yeah she was a bitch, but she's trying to make up for it! That's what counts(: <3

He shou have and very impressed, don't slow down now lol. J am wondering what's going on with Kassi and Austin but I don't see how they could have possibly betrayed Ray unless he's still thinking about before when se was being a bitch to her. But I doubt that and I know you'll tell us soon enough should be interesting. I just never thought that Austin and Kassi would have a reason really to not be happy together.

Ahhhh! Poor Avery:( that's so sad<3 sorry it took so long for me to comment! I'm reading The Host so I can go see it in theaters as soon as possible! But ugh, I know how much it sucks to put on a fake smile & act happy, i could never imagine cutting though. It kills me to think people resort to that:/ it's just so terrible:'( you're doing an amazing job with this story hun! Cannot wait for more<3 (:

Oh dang! o_o They all have serious issues! I mean, Ray and Parker had all this history and now this unknown future, Gavin and his abusive father and all his... anger, Navaeh not being happy with herself and her boyfriend not able to take it anymore and Avery having to pretend to be happy. Their lives are seriously messed up.. I can't wait for them to burst or rather the truths coming out.. This just shows how you can THINK you know someone "so good" but in the end you will NEVER really know what's going on.

Ugh, I LOVE Sheetz! But poor Avery. I didn't expect that at all.

I like it so far, especially seeing different P.O.Vs. The only thing is I don't know how I feel about Gavin anymore :(

Whoa! Didn't know that Navaeh had problem with herself! O_O Ro is such a sweet boyfriend! You are really setting the scale higher and higher for my future boyfriend, you know that? Now he has to have something from Parker and Ro. Being sweet, protective, funny, knowing how to cheer one up, easy going, handsome, smart, ... And the list goes on. Don't think that the guys will be happy.. :p however, it may be mean what Ro did but I think it was the right thing! Hopefully those two know when to get help! Ôô
Can't for a chapter with Parker POV! ;) -let me be! It's your fault that I'm addicted to that character! He's simply too dreamy, too... Parker! :p so, in conclusion: I love the different POV's :DD

I love that it has new perspectives! I think their friendships were an important part of the story by now that other things are going on it's good that were getting to see the other people

OMG. I love it. Why are you so good at captivating me?! Aaaaah! I cannot wait for me. That was so sweet of Ro. I hate the scale. I refuse to step on it because I don't want it to rule me. I like being happy the way I am. That's why I like going tanning:) but seriously neveah's struggle is so common it freightens me & the fact that you're highlighting a lot of issues that take place in society, it's pretty great :) seriously cannot wait for more sweetheart! <3

I love it, but I feel it's is also too soon to tell. Please update as often as you can on this story, it is quite lovely!

Update soon please!

Dang! What are you doing to me?! I now feel really bad for Gavin.. But I shouldn't! He's evil! He's the enemy! He hit her! And if it is one thing I can absolutely not stand is a manhandling a woman! >:[ Ray has to call Parker! -yes, still rooting for him. :p - but I also know that Gavin really likes/loves Rayna.. I wonder if Ray will tell Parker what happened... Yes, my only concern is Parker and I have high hopes for him! Crossing my fingers still! :p

YES. YES. I LOVE YOU. yaaay. Sequel <3 I'm glad you decided on doing a sequel:) it's going to be lovely. Finally ray and Gavin are going to be over with >:) Hehehehe can't wait to read more. <3 :)

I'm glad you decided to make a sequel :) but Gavin was my favorite and this is such a heart wrenching situation because unfortunately it's psychologically learned behavior and they both love each other and he didn't mean it and he obviously needs help; but, they are so young and it's difficult to know how to go from here :/ I loved Gavin he was my favorite !!!! That intro part on the table of contents page is beautifully written it flows like poetry wow.
This is such a long comment for that first chapter lol sorry

Yay! A sequel! Day=made :)