I'n here from comment swap :) I really like this so far! I'm not too sure what this is based on, other than the title (Love We The Kings!!!!) but that's just me being dumb :p The way you write is great and really simple to read, and the explanations as to what happens to Jimmy were great. I think you should build on your characters a little, I know it's only the beginning but description of them would be really great! Keep writing :) x
March 18th, 2013 at 11:39pm