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  • Robynn9436

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    I just read this for the third or fourth time. I really hope you haven't given up on this! It's a great story!
    September 5th, 2013 at 12:39am
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    @ Kamillya143 Thank you so much!(:
    August 2nd, 2013 at 07:02pm
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    You are an amazing writer!!! Keep up the good work!!!!
    August 2nd, 2013 at 04:56pm
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    I cried during chapter 47 & 48.
    August 2nd, 2013 at 04:40pm
  • Kamillya143

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    Chapter 36 is AMAZING!!!
    August 2nd, 2013 at 02:36pm
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    @ Kamillya143 I'm glad to hear that!(:
    August 1st, 2013 at 10:52pm
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    Chapter 19 was not boring!!! I loved it!!!!!!
    August 1st, 2013 at 10:47pm
  • Kamillya143

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    Ohhh myyyy gosssshhh!!!! If I could beat the ish out of her dad I would!!!
    August 1st, 2013 at 10:20pm
  • ninahx

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    @ meredith.rose Haha thanks!(: I will update ASAP.
    August 1st, 2013 at 09:50pm
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    Leaving us hangin girl! Lol good job :)
    August 1st, 2013 at 06:15am
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    AH SUSPENSE. Haha
    August 1st, 2013 at 05:35am
  • Robynn9436

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    Great chapter! I was excited to see an update! The part where Nad was trying to wake Zak was cute.
    August 1st, 2013 at 02:21am
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    @ Raised.Oregon.Style Thank you for the positive feedback!(: Oh, you're right.. I probably should.. I will fix that asap:D
    June 8th, 2013 at 10:37am
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    **Comment Swap**
    So you have a solid first chapter, which is what I read, and I liked it. The layout fits with the story very well. I only saw one or two grammar errors, which is great. I would recommend adding a bit more to the summary than what you have, so readers know what type of story they will be reading!
    June 8th, 2013 at 01:12am
  • ninahx

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    @ Robynn9436 I will update this week ^_^ I have been super busy with Mibba's May writing contest (:
    May 30th, 2013 at 06:20am
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    Please update as soon as you can! I am addicted to this story! Mr. Green
    May 30th, 2013 at 01:54am
  • illtornworld

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    I read abused! This is really great! i felt i was there! So descriptive! Publish this! :-)
    May 18th, 2013 at 03:34pm
  • jessicawhisper

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    I cant wait for the next chapter I LOVE this story thank you thank you thank you so much for writing this XD
    May 14th, 2013 at 05:18am
  • Robynn9436

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    I say go with what you are planning! Your a great writer so I'm sure it will be amazing!

    It's cute that Nad can't seem to keep her hands off Zak. Not that I blame her! If I were her.... LOL! ;)

    I can't wait for the next chapter!
    May 14th, 2013 at 01:37am
  • Robynn9436

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    I don't think there was anything wrong with the last few chapters. They were amazing (just like the rest of the story!)

    As usual I'm dying for more!
    May 10th, 2013 at 10:15pm
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