I Want To Hear You - Comments

@ Hunny_Square
Thanks for letting me know about the mistakes, I will go and fix them now!
And as for the ending I know it wasn't the best and I am considering a short sequel or just a long one shot about Oakley and Paige having a bit of trouble with something like that!

I haven't posted any one shots about Paige and Oakley yet (actually just posted one! It is the most recent of my stories!!) but I have one about Demitri and Ash called Short People and Sports!

Thank you so much for reading and the feedback is always helpful :)

Chapter 22 is weird at the end with the font and at one point in chapter 23 you say paige instead of Demitiri.(("Yes, Paige knows and thankfully there was no screaming!")) Other than that...! I'd like to say that this is something that I would totally binge read, seeming as I just kinda did. I really like the writing style and the only that that really bothered me was the end, I kinda wanted some sort of drama, not necessarily with the parents but maybe with Demitari? Or an internal conflict with Paige? Maybe paige or Oakley has some sort of break down because he(paige) can't stand not being able to hear his(oakley) voice(or (oakley) being able to hear him(paige))?

It was super fantastic though and was wondering if I could get the titles of the one shots????? Maybe please? ♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡♡

I agree with Ashymandy on Oakley not signing...I'm deaf and well everyone I've meet makes an effort to sign to me. But i do really like the story

@ AshyMandy
I thought I mentioned in somewhere in the story but I might have missed that part. Oakley can sign, he just prefers not to do it, with writing it is easier to talk to people that can't sign and that way he can save all the conversations and read back on his life later on! (I hope this all makes sense to you...)

I've only just lost my hearing. I really hate that oakley can't sign. You really do pick it up in weeks. I can already communicate well with some of my deaf friends. I like the idea of the story don't get me wrong. I like you style of writing . I just really hate that you portray Oakley poorly with being deaf.

This story was really great :)

It's over :( looking forward to the one shots!!!

Ooh, anticipation!
Enjoy your vacation :)

Great chapter!! Can't wait to see what happens :)

Thanks for updating :)

Aww great chapter!!! I do love Ashton, he is really sweet!!! And you should definitely do what you said in the authors note :) that sounds good!!

Really liked it!! Both boys are so sweet :)

Cute update!! I love Oakley freaking out about his brother!! Can't wait for more :)

Thanks for updating!

I'm so happy this story isn't over yet and there will be more chapters :D

Cute chapter :)

Thanks for updating!
I can't wait for the next chapter :)

Oh, this story is so cute! I can't wait until your next update.

Oh my goodness!! It doesn't seem out of place at all. I'm actually a bit worried about Oakley!! Hope everything is okay!!

Just found this story and I really love it :) I hope Paige says yes!! I'm sure he will :)