I.. just don't like Kailey right now. I feel like she's overreacting and running away from everything. I hope she gets her shit together. If she doesn't love Aaron, why is she doing all that she's doing? Yeah, he's a douche, but that's life. Not everyone is a lovely person. I feel that she's also being very unfair with Harry. She's acting like a little kid so she shouldn't be surprised that people see her that way. Then again she's dealing with the stress of her life not being the way she pictured, her first real break-up, and the shock of being on tabloids. I'm barely on chapter five and the way you are writing her gives her plenty of room to grow as character, which is good. I am loving Lianna, though. :)
pleaaase update the next chapter soon! i feel so sad i just keep checking to see if you've updated haha:D but i really love this! chapter soooon!! cc x
I laughed so hard when Lianne make that comment and got Kailey to laugh and cause all attention on her. Reminded me of myself and my obnoxious laughter. I can't wait for more!:)
I don't really listen to One Direction, so I was a little doubtful when this came up on comment swap, but I was pleasantly surprised. I love the way you write. I love your description and your dialogue and it all flows so well. I only read chapter one so far but I'll be coming back to read the rest when I have a chance. I love the main character already. Also I just thought I'd just say your username is fab.
I don't really listen to One Direction, so I was a little doubtful when this came up on comment swap, but I was pleasantly surprised. I love the way you write. I love your description and your dialogue and it all flows so well. I only read chapter one so far but I'll be coming back to read the rest when I have a chance. I love the main character already. Also I just thought I'd just say your username is fab.