Almost Perfect - Comments

I'm guessing the turkey baster method was used by that stripper. Adam woke up with just his boxers on. More likely he was set up by her to get money from him in the form of child support. When clearly he passed out, the stripper took-ahem-matters into her own hands.

The story was brilliant. The characters were brilliant. The situations were brilliant. The ending was sadly brilliant. I'm going to miss this story, but "Playing for Keeps" is on the horizon, hooray!!! Pleeeeeease don't stop writing! You're really good. :D :D :D Can't wait to read the sequel, and find out more about...everything!

The story was brilliant. The characters were brilliant. The situations were brilliant. The ending was sadly brilliant. I'm going to miss this story, but "Playing for Keeps" is on the horizon, hooray!!! Pleeeeeease don't stop writing! You're really good. :D :D :D Can't wait to read the sequel, and find out more about...everything!

What an unexpected ending, but it was a good ending. I like how you're not afraid as an author to end a story unhappily. I feel like it gives me more of a chance as a reader to predict and finish the story in my head. I can't wait for the sequel!

Ok im mad but you sort of foreshadowed this to us! So its to be expected but yu just wanna get mad lol. I was reading it and than i screamed a big NO like a weirdo. Excellent story! Cant wait for the sequel!

Please* I forgot to add please to that update ASAP!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. ok. So I'm not angry with you because I think you're a wonderful writer, but I am so angry with how this just ended. That sequel better be good and sweet and cute. Update ASAP!

I am not happy at all I am pissed off and tht bitch is lying....take a real fucking test where the bitch doesn't have to pay the fucking doctor and lie about the god damn paternity test once tht baby is born take another test becuz I don't believe tht it's his baby, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

This story is sooo good. I always look forward to reading it. My day always becomes better when I get an email notifying me there is a new chapter. :) I can't wait for an update.

Ugh I hope that trashy bitch goes down. She's so annoying! Can't wait for more!

I am not ready for the last chapter....I'm expecting good news and tht bitch goes to jail for lying idk I just want tht fucking bitch out of here asap anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Love this chapter it was really cute and I'm just happy tht they r reuniting their little family.....*reads author note: almost over!?!? Is she serious, what kind of trickery is this??? Oh wait a sequel well ok thn I will accept tht then it's better than nothing* can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I read "almost over" and thought NO!!! Then I read "sequel" and I thought YES!!!

Love love love this! I'm so happy they're back! Sequel? I think yes!!!

Okie I love this I really do, but I'd be rather enthused if these two got back together and could be a family again !!! More soon please! Please please please!

UGh. This is too much! So sad.

Ugh this kills me. It so kills me. I hate that they fight more soon!

I don't think he slept with her becuz in one of the pictures tht was taken the fucking hippo had a devious look on her face which means tht this bitch is up to something and on top of tht if the last thing Adam remembers was having three beers and thn the fourth drink he felt fuzzy and doesn't recall anymore information after tht last drink thn he was drugged....tht hippo drugged, raped and stole from him can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

AND THE DRAMA HAS ARRIVED!!!!!! :D :D :D So so so so so excited to see what happens. In my opinion.....I bet he did sleep with that woman. He was drunk...things got fuzzy....the picture doesn't lie....he woke up in his hotel room with things a mess...Yep. I've just convinced myself. =D ;) Update soon! Can't wait to see what's gonna go down!

NO. NO. NO. THEY NEED TO BE ALL CUTE AGAIN. okey so you are wonderful and should update because I have big exams tomorrow and need an entertaining study break! More please!