The latest chapter was gorgeous as per usual. This story is quickly becoming one of my favourites on Mibba. I love Ella, and this is so awful but throughout the whole chapter I was hoping Callum would get eaten. :/ He annoys me already. The way Will threatened him earned him so many points.
I adore Ella and Will's relationship. The way he covered her with his jacket and hugged her as she cried. :'( My heart cannot take it. Also Will's relationship with Grace seems interesting, the whole meeting on the beach thing. The description of the zombie's smell was disgustingly vivid.
LOL SHE HIT HIM ON THE HEAD AGAIN FOR GOOD MEASURE WELL U KNOW WHAT HE DESERVED IT K PENNY YOU'RE WORTH MORE THAN THAT what in the world are muesli bars omf granola is all I know-a that was an awful rhyme
On what silk tea said, yes Clementine and Lee vibe yes I am feeling this lets get this show on the road. I loved their relationship in The Walking Dead. Although the end made me cry really badly.
aoisdhaiosdhasuo!11 So I'm in love. I think Ella is precious and I don't know if you've ever played The Walking Dead but I'm kind of sensing a Lee and Clementine vibe here and if this story is anything like that one I'll be crying my heart out by the end of it...so not looking forward to that.
this story is amazing so far, and I can't wait for an update. The layout for the story is flawless, and it kind of makes me jealous. It's just all around perfect. gaaah . just like the everyone else, I feel like I'm going on an adventure. I hate to be unoriginal, but that's definitely how it makes me feel. wow, wow, wow... I've been in search of an amazing story to be keeping up with, and I think I've found it... this is flawless... <3
This is gorgeous. I agree with unapalomayunaflor, it feels like I'm about to go on this marvelous adventure and that makes me so excited. I've been looking for something like this for ages. Idk, it's just been a while since I've read a story on Mibs and gone on an absolutely riveting adventure. xD
My body is so ready for this story. I really like how you use repetition in this chapter. It creates such an intriguing opening and I'm just ready for this to happen. All I gotta say.