I'm loving the layout, and I think the first paragraph is really cute, especially how you went into just a little bit of extra detail, it's small things like that, that give us a better view of the person. The first chapter is really very good, so far I think this is really cute. I'm on the second chapter now, and it's pretty good, I think you all are off to a very good start to a lovely little story.
March 30th, 2013 at 04:17am