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  • violetkarma

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    I llove this idea. You should continue.
    May 8th, 2013 at 02:05am
  • unmask your desire

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    Argh, I love this. :3
    April 10th, 2013 at 10:23am
  • CaesarSalad

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    I am really enjoying this. I want to read more and soon. Please. It's odd that she's 16, but I guess it'll make more sense as you get further into this. Keep it up.
    April 9th, 2013 at 11:57pm
  • Daisy.Rae

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    So confused...The Son of Coul has a daughter? Is Miradee that daughter? hmm...keep the chappys coming. I LOVE IT!
    April 7th, 2013 at 10:45pm
  • HelloRiah!

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    This story is headed in a neat direction!! Can't wait until you release more, update soon!!!
    April 7th, 2013 at 08:07pm
  • deactivatedError

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    This looks amazing update soon!
    April 3rd, 2013 at 11:08pm
  • Daughter Monster

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    This is a pretty unique plot for a Loki fanfiction; most of the ones I read he's in love with some mortal or something. Or, you know, his own brother... Coffee .... ahem.... anyway, I like how it's placed within SHEILD, and most of the Avengers (extra points for Phil Coulson, by the way) are present. Like I said, I've never read a Loki story where it was a girl who's uncle worked for SHIELD and such; it's definitely a good backdrop to the story. The green layout adds a nice touch too.
    I think the only thing I have a complaint about is the fact that Miradee is sixteen, that makes me a bit nervous, but I can get over that. Your story is really awesome, I'm going to subscribe and I can't wait to see what you come up with next, dear Pat
    March 25th, 2013 at 01:37pm
  • Daisy.Rae

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    Ok a couple things...
    *I LOVE AGENT COULSON!!
    *I love the part at the very last line, I,my dear, am Loki. I can even see his toothy smile as he says that.
    *I love the first part here you have a great start and I can't wait to read more. I am subscribing and look forward to the rest of the story. Huggles
    March 20th, 2013 at 10:13pm
  • Abstractly-Disguised

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    <3 Amazing, I could almost feel what Miradee was feeling X)
    March 20th, 2013 at 07:45pm