I am really enjoying this. I want to read more and soon. Please. It's odd that she's 16, but I guess it'll make more sense as you get further into this. Keep it up.
This is a pretty unique plot for a Loki fanfiction; most of the ones I read he's in love with some mortal or something. Or, you know, his own brother... .... ahem.... anyway, I like how it's placed within SHEILD, and most of the Avengers (extra points for Phil Coulson, by the way) are present. Like I said, I've never read a Loki story where it was a girl who's uncle worked for SHIELD and such; it's definitely a good backdrop to the story. The green layout adds a nice touch too. I think the only thing I have a complaint about is the fact that Miradee is sixteen, that makes me a bit nervous, but I can get over that. Your story is really awesome, I'm going to subscribe and I can't wait to see what you come up with next, dear
Ok a couple things... *I LOVE AGENT COULSON!! *I love the part at the very last line, I,my dear, am Loki. I can even see his toothy smile as he says that. *I love the first part here you have a great start and I can't wait to read more. I am subscribing and look forward to the rest of the story. Huggles