Control the Meaning of Words - Comments

You have a great character voice. I have trouble with that myself. I worry all my characters sound like a 22 year old girl (me). It's great to see this level of talent on here! Keep up the good work. I'm subscribing and recommending so please give us more!

With All Due Respect,

I really like this story! The summary is very good as well. I like how your writing can actually keep me interested in your story. I actually let out a few laughs at this story. Update soon, this is really good!

Comment Swap~

I am in love with this. I've never laughed so much at a story. You have such a way with words. I have no complaints, I didn't see any mistakes and your layout is perfect. Although, your summary is a bit long but I wouldn't change it. I'm def subscribing, keep up the good work!

*Comment swap- So I just read your story, and I must say it's pretty brilliant so far. There's some things to me seem a bit farfetched, but other than that seems like pretty legit realistic fiction. It be nice to have had more of expansion on Laura, also the future story about marrying an alcoholic, etc. etc. I don't know who that was directed at. Angie seems to be the one who cried about it like it was directed at her, Lydia didn't at all seem upset so I don't know if it was directed at her or not. Not sure if you fixed up for the spelling and grammar check or not because there weren't any errors that popped out at me. Last thing I'm looking at is the layout which to me is a bit buggy. The image isn't showing up as it should, perhaps align the content up on the left and make is skinnier and not as wide. I don't know what the image is neither, but based off of what I've picked up so far, I don't think this layout quite fits for this story.

Anyways, great job and keep it up.