Jimmy is really a good friend. I'm smiling while reading this chapter because I can totally picture Brian tickling his little girl and I know that any little girl would love to call him daddy.
That part you added was great!!! It really made the chapter more complete in a way... I'm confusing myself... It took me like five minutes to decide to use the word complete. Anyway, I love this as always!
I loved this update. It's nice that there was more to the reason she left besides being scared of his reaction. I hope for the best with your niece an nephew, I have two of my own and I'm happy they're a bit older now so it's not as intense. And also best of luck to your friend! I've only listened to two songs so far. I know what you mean about not fully getting into it right away, that's how I was with Folie A Duex. Okay, I think that's all I have to say right now.