Interesting, I like, though the starting of this story seems to be in the middle of the scene in the story, like there should have been a chapter before Interrogation.
Guessing this is also taking place 30 years after the original movie and Mike in this, is Micheal from the movie? lol guess David got what he wanted in the end.
David is being described as never been human. Some detail into Davids origins in your story sounds like something good to go into, prequel squeal to this story perhaps? As well as what happened after the movie as seems David rebuilt his pack with new bloodsuckers.
Josh is a prick, he needs his ass kicked. lol. Guy sounds like he just hates strong women that handle themselves well.
Guessing this is also taking place 30 years after the original movie and Mike in this, is Micheal from the movie? lol guess David got what he wanted in the end.
David is being described as never been human. Some detail into Davids origins in your story sounds like something good to go into, prequel squeal to this story perhaps? As well as what happened after the movie as seems David rebuilt his pack with new bloodsuckers.
Josh is a prick, he needs his ass kicked. lol. Guy sounds like he just hates strong women that handle themselves well.