April 5th, 2013 at 03:39am
Pick A Photo, Write A Story Contest Comment:
"It all started in 3rd grade when Riley accidentally dropped her ant farm all over me, and after class I ‘accidentally’ slammed my fist into her face"
"It was also the day that the Trio de Awesome (formerly known as the Bad Ass Bitches, but our moms wouldn’t let us call ourselves that) was formed."
"Naomi cleared her throat and did her patented ‘I’m going to flip my hair and you’re all going to love me, because I’m the devil’ move, and cleared her throat."
These are just a few of my favorite lines from this short. I have to say this was brilliant! The story you got from this picture was something I would not have expected. The use of the bear suits to scare Naomi and comparing them to Goldilocks and The Three Bears was even more brilliant. The introduction of how The Trio de Awesome met was truly awesome. Their group name lives up to their story I have to say! This piece was a very creative and a fun read. Your writing was well written and I enjoyed this. Thank for entering my contest and check on it tomorrow to see if you won.
Thanks for the lovely comment! I'm glad you liked it! :D