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  • Fire and Ash.

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    I love this story!!!! Please update soon. :D
    July 9th, 2014 at 03:47am
  • pbreyoung1996

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    i love it...update please
    June 30th, 2013 at 07:50pm
  • marsflor

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    @ blaQk
    That's great! Sometimes I think that people get too wrapped up on the fluffy romance and sexual stuff that they forget to make it accurate to the books. And it ends up being too unrealistic because the bond between the characters is only romance and sex—not friendship. I'm sure you'll do fantastic :3
    May 1st, 2013 at 05:05pm
  • blaQk

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    @ festus thank you! I mean, everyone loves a romantic story, they love the sexual bond and stuff but honestly, I want to make this as realistic and to date (twilight date, of course, so no 2013 references, strictly 2006-2008) thats my goal!!
    April 29th, 2013 at 10:11pm
  • marsflor

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    Ugh, this story is so good. I hope you continue updating because it's truly worth reading. You deserve so many more reads and recs and comments. It's so hard to come by a well-written fan fiction nowadays but yours is just delightful. I'm not a huge fan of Twilight but I would seriously continue reading this story till the end. c: I really like how things aren't so rushed between Embry and Des.
    April 29th, 2013 at 09:02pm
  • katreena

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    this story is great so far !
    April 15th, 2013 at 03:40am
  • just.breathe.

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    I love this story!! Can't wait to read more!!
    March 26th, 2013 at 02:30pm
  • xnightchangesx

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    I love your story so far. (:
    March 25th, 2013 at 06:12pm