January 1st, 2018 at 09:05pm
Comment swap.
I know that this hasn't been updated in 4 years and I commented like 3 years ago so I doubt you'll see this comment anyways.
But I really like this story. It's truly an original and interesting idea and story. I love how you can sorta feel how sarcastic Maybelle is in her thoughts and how she is trying to keep true to herself even though she's in this situation.
If you do ever read this comment and decide to pick up where you left off with this story I would definitely read it.
Also there are a few grammatical errors in it that I would just go through and fix. You can also swear so you don't need "sh!t" you can type it out.
But overall it's a great story and I would love to read more of it because where it's cut off right now is a bit of a cliff hanger. Like what's going to happen next with Rikuto? And what happened to Janie? Where is she? Will she come back?
And I know it's a long shot that you'll come back and update this story. But if you do I know it would be a hit.
Hey! I know you commented four months ago, but I just now checked my account when I haven't been on this website just because I've been really busy and kind of forgot about it. I really appreciate your comment and just wanted to respond by saying I am considering writing again. If I do, it'll be sparingly just because I'm in college now and don't have as much time as I used to (it's hard to believe I wrote this when I was 14 ). But again, your comment meant a lot and I love that you loved the story :)