Creep - Comments

Amazing

That is an understatement

Your words painted the picture and I felt like I was standing next to Jacob the entire time and I wasn't too fond of him (since he DID go and kiss Bella when she DIDN'T ask) but now, I want to drag her to see what's going on and give Jacob a big hug and cookies.

:) I like the story, its one of those you read and pick up hidden messages that the writer doesn't even notice

That was great. Beautiful. So vivid. Wonderfully written. I love your style.

But beyond all, it was affecting. Powerful. I can feel the pain and sadness Jacob feels. It makes me want to cry out myself. It's such a shame that Jacob has to feel like that. You captured how I'm sure he really feels as a character so perfectly. It makes my heart ache. Poor Jacob.

wow, so that story was amazing.

first of all, i love stephenie meyers' series.

i believe she would be proud of you. you did the story excellent justice.

i could see everything that was happening so vividly. you have an excellent way with words. you can thank rex. otherwise, i probably never would have read it.
but it really is amazing.

my favorite part was your imagery. it was just dazzling.

i absolutely loved it.