Getting a Complete Stranger to Smile - Comments

This is so sweet :)

@ MasqueradingMemories
yeah I'm planning on Jack helping him finish his list or something? maybe, idk, but i'll definitely do a part two and three ^_^

This was like reallyyy good. I loved it and am hoping there will be a part two and three so Alex can complete his list?

@ Ritazzzzaaaa
aawww thankyou so much!

aww omg awwW seriously this was so cute and really well written!! You're great :3

@ mawganzola
aawww omfg thankyou so much! yeah i've been thinking about making it in to a chaptered fic?? like, a chapter for each thing on the list?? But i'll totally get to work on the other two things he had to do ^_^ i'm wprking on the paragraph thing :/ sorry

@ ironi1234
thanks! yeah i've been told i should do shorter paragraphs before :/ I'm working on it though!

this is really interesting. Keep going babe! :)

this was super fabulous I really like your writing style and yeahh :D The paragraphs are a little long though and it can get a little confusing to read but apart from that, this was fabulous :333 please tell me that there's going to be another part or two that's going to be the 'go somewhere with a a person you don't/hardly know' and 'give someone in need something important' please please please write them omfg it would make me so happy :D xx

Hi so first this was great! It's a really cool idea and I loved the way you described everything. I didn't like the way it was spaced out with the paragraphs though. It's kinda hard to read. You should do shorter paragraphs. Anyway good job!