Hard Water - Comments

@ grace violet blood.
omg hiiiii thank you so much, i'm glad you like it, i know i haven't updated it in like 6 months bc i'm awful like that! but i will get around to it sometime soon i promiseeee

i'm telling you right now
if you don't update soon i might have to cry like a lot idk i love this story omg (rly rly rly)

This story is interesting. I like how the story takes place on a small island and how there are only about 100 people living there. I don't like how many characters there are in this story. I feel like there is two main characters and a bunch of other characters. I know that they are important to the story, but I feel like there is too many of them and it is hard to keep track of who is who. I'm interested to see where Momo and her fiance's relationship is going, but I wish it was the main idea in very chapter and not just every other one.
I love the story layout and how you have added a character tab.

It's definitely interesting!! I can't wait to read more. Please update soon! :)

love this story!! its is really good

Whoa

such a great story!! i hope mona leaves callum

i'm really liking the story update soon :)

chapter 8 :O Loving the story :3... hurry up and release chapter 9 ._.

whoaaaaaaa

I really like the story so far keep up the good work and update soon