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  • ebony_goddess

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    WHAAAAT!!! No way!! That last line....speechless!! You better update soon. Oh gosh, I did not see that coming, that definitely escalated fast.
    May 27th, 2013 at 10:46pm
  • fiction246

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    Oh my gosh!!!! What the hell!!! I want to know what happens next!!!
    May 26th, 2013 at 11:43pm
  • January Rose

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    I like the ending part but that still is totally embarrassing. Smile
    May 22nd, 2013 at 05:10am
  • fiction246

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    Haha that bit at the end there!!!! Love it :)
    May 22nd, 2013 at 01:51am
  • January Rose

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    Babies are cute and everything, but waking up in the middle of the night can be hard and sometimes a pain. I'm glad Pandora has her mother who is supportive of her and her child. Smile
    May 5th, 2013 at 04:59pm
  • fiction246

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    Poor pandora!!! Its nice that her mum helped though :)
    May 5th, 2013 at 09:23am
  • fiction246

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    I hope that Zane and Pandora can make it work!! Looking forward to more :)
    April 19th, 2013 at 01:44am
  • January Rose

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    I really like how Zane wants to be part of his daughter's life. Most teen Dad would walk out of the picture, wanting nothing to do with their child. I'm glad Zane is different. Pandora is really going to need him to raise their child.
    Update soon! Smile
    April 19th, 2013 at 01:03am
  • fiction246

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    Awww the last line was really sweet :) looking forward to more!!!
    April 11th, 2013 at 02:27am
  • prettyeyessparkle

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    @ JanuaryRose
    Thank you! You've got the story down PERFECTLY!! More to come soon! Thanks for reading!
    April 11th, 2013 at 01:44am
  • prettyeyessparkle

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    @ fiction246
    Thanks so much!!
    April 11th, 2013 at 01:43am
  • fiction246

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    This is looking really good so far. I am looking forward to seeing more of Zane. I feel bad for Pandora's mum :(
    April 10th, 2013 at 11:45am
  • January Rose

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    I like this teen parent story. And I'm glad that Zane is back in Pandora and her baby's life. It's just sad that he didn't call/text or even keep in contact with Pandora throughout her whole pregnancy time. And her "best" friend, should have been there for her. That was the ultimate test of their friendship and she failed it. I know if my best friend or even friend became pregnant, I would be first in line to help them. Friends are supposed to be loyal and help you through though times, not abandon you when it seems like the easier option.

    This is really good and I can't wait to read more! Smile Smile
    April 10th, 2013 at 01:07am