Morose. - Comments

way too rushed

Okay, I absolutely love the version of Draco that you created in this. He was so cute when he playing with Ailicis in the garden, and still being his usual sassy self that we all know him for, while still being a little bit sweeter. You could tell that he actually cared about Alicis because he treated her so differently than he did everyone else.
Oh no, I can’t believe they got rid of their memories ): That’s sad because they were actually precious little friends and all of that is ruined. As surprising as it is, I’ve never actually seen that spell used in that way in a fanfic before, so I commend you on your originality!

Awh this is absolutely adorable! I loved all of it plus your writing contained the right amount of description AND simplicity
Brilliant:)

Layout: 9/10
Title:8/10
Word Usage: The word usage was really good.
Overall: 8/10
Comments: I do apologize for taking so very long to get to this. I can't make any excuses, just that I'm sorry. This was a beautiful story and I really enjoyed it. I don't understand how there isn't any comments. One of the things that I really loved was the descriptions you used, they just really made the story and made me smile from ear to ear. The ending,oh wow. :) It was so cute, the little interaction between Alicis and Scorpius. x3 Too cute.