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  • captainfishsparkl3

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    purrfecto
    July 28th, 2013 at 05:29pm
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    love it
    March 26th, 2013 at 06:29am
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    this is fab omfg
    March 25th, 2013 at 06:01pm
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    @ Katalystic_Killjoy
    @Katalystic_Killjoy I thought that too, I'm gonna try and figure something out. c: And not a sammich, we're getting married. Muahaha.
    March 25th, 2013 at 08:16am
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    March 25th, 2013 at 08:15am
  • Katalystic_Killjoy

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    I like how it is so far, but the POV format that you've chosen is a bit annoying to me. I mean, I'm fairly sure readers could figure out who is who and all, but to me, having it alternate at a point where it's only like, two-four sentences is a bit annoying. I do like how it's going, and how you do have what they're thinking, and how reasonable it seems.
    I made you a compliment sammich~ I think....
    March 25th, 2013 at 08:09am
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