Living’s a Wicked Dream - Comments

I love the banner!
And, I love the story c: I think it's rather brilliant xDD

Your story is pretty interesting so far. The chapters are quite short and I would suggest to add more descriptions. I like the characters, but the seem to be lacking some development. You don't really feel the emotions of the characters. I enjoy the overall concept of the story and you are a good writer. I am surprised there are not any comments. Anyways, keep up the work and I look forward to reading more. Also, I love your banner.