WOW! I'm getting so angry from reading this chapter. That lady is a total bitch! If I were Carrie, I would've snatched that fucking envelope from her hands.
awww Steve-o <3 He's so sweet. I like that he made her laugh and we get to learn a bit more about her past, it makes her a bit more believable character. The conversation's are believable and give the story a nice flow.
I'm interested in what's going to happen with this. it's a very well written opening, the descriptions are very lifelike and set the scene in a way that creates a lot of sympathy for the main character.