Blood - Comments

So, this fic is two of my favorite things in one: really twisted violent stuff and fluff. (Yeah, I know; I'm a weirdo. ) I really love how you describe both extremes, too. I also think it's a really interesting idea to take something from The Youngblood Chronicles and work it into a story that isn't set in that universe; I would never have thought to do something like that. It's so creative, and it's a really interesting way to make sort of a reaction fic to that series. Also, once again, two of my favorite things: the Youngblood Chronicles and well-written peterick.

In short, I really dig your story. Thanks for recommending it to me!

The description of the dream is so great! There's a lot of short sentences, which normally I wouldn't be a fan of, but it works for this, like Patrick is just picking up one detail at a time in the dream in quick succession. It's like any bad dream someone has where they're in a situation that they're trying to get out of but they can't and you showed that really well through Patrick's fear and the attempts he makes to push his captor's away. And then a great transition into waking and the fear is still with him. I always find when I have a bad dream I can remember it so easily and I can always still feel that fear even after I'm awake and I know that it wasn't real.

Awww Pete is so adorably worried about Patrick. I love how you showed how much Pete cares for Patrick just by being there, and Pete cleans up Patrick's vomit and makes him tea (after having to search for tea and continuing to search for tea even after Patrick said coffee was fine). I don't even know what else to say... I thought the aftermath of the dream was just sweet and cute. This was really well written and I'm glad I read this!

Love it, the first chapter had me freaking out because I swear I could see it. I feel so bad, because Patricks really afraid but oh he and his little protector were just too cute. Could read this over and over again.