this is perfect. oh my god. Poor Jack. I mean, I feel awful for him and I can sort of relate. He seemed so sad... I love how Zack watched out for him, and Rian, too. Then aww! They're going to tell the world! you should write another oneshot on that!
hi okay so the dialogue in this is really well done, and props on making it canon adjacent. i like the storyline, and the whole thing is just the right length and everything is just really excellent. i may have teared up a tiny bit.