Eternal Airen - Comments

  • Ethan Chandler.

    Ethan Chandler. (115)

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    I really loved reading this!
    I've never read this manga before, but from what you've written here I really want to check it out now.
    I loved the letter format and you managed to put so much emotion into it in that form, and I really felt for the protagonist.
    "Even now that I think about it, you took all my firsts and I hadn’t even realized it back then." I loved this line a lot, it's really beautiful. And I loved how you brought it up again near the end of the letter, and kind of ended it with it.
    You did a great job on this. Thanks for entering it in my contest! Results should be up very shortly :)
    March 16th, 2014 at 02:56am
  • CrimsonSlave

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    Amazing. <3 It would be awesome if you wrote more letters like the first one. I believe you caught Kurumi's personality very well with just that letter from her. Way to go. :D
    March 31st, 2013 at 02:40pm
  • CrimsonSlave

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    Amazing. <3 It would be awesome if you wrote more letters like the first one. I believe you caught Kurumi's personality very well with just that letter from her. Way to go. :D
    March 31st, 2013 at 02:40pm