Small Town Heroes - Comments

  • Angel Dust

    Angel Dust (885)

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    The latest two chapters were short but to the point! Enough said, mmkay? But of course the fourth one is really descriptive and I feel that the screams the guy hears is some kind of symbolism. ~~
    April 3rd, 2013 at 05:48am
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    Short but descriptive and sweet! I'm loving this story more and more! <3 Another lovely chapter, Gatsby! :D
    March 30th, 2013 at 02:36am
  • Angel Dust

    Angel Dust (885)

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    These the so many questions I ask myself. Gats, I gotta say, this is one of your best pieces yet! You really made me think and that is almost hard to do. Woo! Great job. I see no spelling errors or grammatical errors which is a major plus in my book. :)
    March 29th, 2013 at 08:16pm