The latest two chapters were short but to the point! Enough said, mmkay? But of course the fourth one is really descriptive and I feel that the screams the guy hears is some kind of symbolism.
These the so many questions I ask myself. Gats, I gotta say, this is one of your best pieces yet! You really made me think and that is almost hard to do. Woo! Great job. I see no spelling errors or grammatical errors which is a major plus in my book. :)