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  • the fallen.

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    I smiled when he was all dressed up for Brendon.
    And when he said "How long was it been since you fucked a girl?"

    I lol'd.
    June 18th, 2009 at 10:05pm
  • the fallen.

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    I smiled when he was all dressed up for Brendon.
    And when he said "How long was it been since you fucked a girl?"

    I lol'd.
    June 18th, 2009 at 10:05pm
  • all for believing.

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    ^_^

    Hahaha. I love the, "How long has it been since you fucked a girl?"
    That was priceless.
    May 10th, 2008 at 12:06am
  • HotelBellaMuerte.

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    YAY! *claps* i love it! my favorite ryden EVER!!!!!! It was like, SOOOOOOOOO sexy!!!!
    May 7th, 2008 at 02:36am
  • ILYstephanie

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    That was...different..but totally awesome. I always try out new things and that was deffinetly new. Nice Job ^_^
    May 3rd, 2008 at 08:36am
  • RENT.

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    This remionds me slightly of decayed dancer.
    It's not cute, definately not cute, it's like, fucking erotica or something -snorts-

    Ryan dressing up for Brendon is adorable. Ryan fucking Brendon is even better.

    Genernally graphic stories are quite distasteful, but you managed it well. Didn't make it corny or disgusting or anything like that.

    <33
    May 3rd, 2008 at 07:22am
  • building god.

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    That.
    Was.
    Amazing.
    Great job.
    Now officially my fav ryden ever.
    April 30th, 2008 at 01:05am
  • prescription

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    :shock:that. was. hot. :yah
    April 29th, 2008 at 08:27pm
  • FatalWreck

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    Sweet Geesus.
    I loved it. *drool*
    April 29th, 2008 at 04:46pm
  • Sensual Violation

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    clinging to a chest that wasn’t there an hour ago

    The most ludicrous images came to mind.
    April 29th, 2008 at 01:14pm
  • chrissie.

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    This was really good. I love your writing, Dru. In Love
    April 29th, 2008 at 12:22pm
  • oxford comma.

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    "Cute" isn't really the correct adjective for this.
    I like it and the concept behind it and how Brendon and Ryan work together.
    My favorite lines:

    He was trying so hard to be sexy, to be flirty. His dance moves were awkward and his ankles were wobbly, but it didn’t matter. Brendon was still completely awestruck.

    “How long has it been since you fucked a girl?”

    obscenities and pet names
    April 29th, 2008 at 05:36am
  • junior

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    After the long wait, we finally get to read this.
    It was really good, I really liked it.
    :]
    April 29th, 2008 at 04:09am
  • we are galaxies.

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    Kristen's first cross-dressing fic.
    O_O
    I hate this pairing, but :yah anyways.
    April 29th, 2008 at 03:56am
  • folie a dru.

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    A late Brendon birthday fic.
    Ryan cross-dresses and gives Brendon a dance.
    Smut.
    NC-17.

    Happy reading!

    xoxox
    -Dru
    April 29th, 2008 at 03:51am
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