Despair of a Princess - Comments

@ TheInevitableTruth
I'll be posting a bunch of my other stories soon. I don't plan on extending this because I based it off someone else's work and I like how it dramatically ends. :P

Go check out the stories I have if you like! I'm glad you came to check this out.

Lol, I feel almost evil with this story sitting in my account. Dark Disney. Coming to a screen near you.

This almost seems like a dark version of a Disney princess movie! I love the idea of it. The tone and descriptions are fantastic. Something about her telling me to stop reading it made me think "you silly girl, now i have to read it!" I would definitely read it if you continued on with it. :D

@ Daughter Monster
I'm glad you enjoyed it. This piece was based on someone else's piece and I had a lot of fun becoming descriptive on it. When you do things like creative work, learn truths and ask questions that's when you feel happiest. We are intelligent people, its important to think, and I found I got to do that with this with the imagery. :D

I threw a happily ever after in there...didnt you see it?? (hehehe)

I love the descriptive imagery in this, it reminds me of the movie, the Brothers Grimm (I think that's what it was called, I haven't seen it in an incredibly long time). She sounds indifferent to the Disney princesses we all grew up believing that we were, and instead the angsty teenagers we became when we realized there's no such thing as "happily ever after." I love that twist, it makes her incredibly relate-able, especially for someone that's living in the angst years at the moment.