In the Clearing - Comments

@viralstorm

Thanks so much! And thank you for letting me enter in your contest. :)

Thanks again for entering my contest! You rock!

I absolutely love all of the description you use. My favorite is this, " The moon hung, bright and full amongst the twinkling ethereal lights, illuminating the forest that loomed before her." Really beautiful description and I could picture the moment like I was there myself.

"Keir slipping off her black flats with her toes." <--Only mistake I found, which is awesome.

I couldn't get enough of this. The ending cracked me up, with her actually worrying about Embry telling everyone. Well done. :)

we definitely need more of that!! ;)

That was better than I expected (plot wise), I loved how Jacob toyed with her taking her close off. Greatly written, I felt like I never had to read the Twilight Saga to understand characters.