Carmen - Comments

This was a pleasant shock to my system. I'm used to the cheesiness that comes with most stories on mibba, but this.....this was great. I don't hate Carmen. She taught Casey a life lesson. It was a shitty one, but it was a lesson nonetheless. The warning was there. Casey chose to ignore it. I don't blame Carmen for her reaction. You live and you learn. This was amazing.

Amazing story wow

Utterly incredible story. The realism of it all was incredible and I loved how true your characters were. Impeccable job, dear. :)

This story was fucking ridiculously good! I was so relieved to see that the ending was not a happy one and it was all just a story to show a innocent girls fall from grace. Too often I read stories that finish with a polished happy ending when they shouldn't because it's unrealistic. It's very rare that I read an original fiction as good as that so thank you for you're amazing ability to wright and for sharing this story with us all.

DAMN! DAMN! DAMN!!!

I am so glad I finished this story, I felt emotionally fucked. This is definitely a YA fiction that deserves to be read by everyone. I was on the edge of my seat, I don't even hate Carmen but I do sort of hate Casey. Only because she fucked up Dan.

Great job, darling. Bravo.

this is beautiful

Wow... I like how the story is progressing!

I still have questions. Did she ever recover, move on with life, tell her parents what happened, try to kill herself again, work things out with Dan maybe? I might not get my answers, but just wanted you to know that I have them. P.S. Carmen is a bitch.

XD sorry in reading so late :(

WOW.
THAT WAS A SPECTACULAR ENDING
AND I KNEW CARMEN WOULD TURN OUT TO BE AN ASSHOLE

This was absolutely incredible, and amazing and wow, novel material right there.

Is that the end? but what happened with dan and stuff?! And does she actually recover? I'm still left with so many questions :(

It was great! I'll miss it c:

Definitely just got the chills!! That was soo good!

Oh my god that was amazing!

Aww Dan is too sweet :)

well at least she's fUCKING ADMITTING SHE DID SOME SHIT STUFF
JFC
I like Dan
that is all

Yeah Dan was very calm. I wonder what he said to her parents. Aside from assisting her with the drugs, I liked him. Update again please xx.

I feel like that was some kind of final goodbye to Dan. :/ even though he's an enabler he's the most likable person, he'll be sorely missed if he's gone for good.

Dan was pretty calm about the situation? o.O Just me? Overall good though :D