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  • sunshinensarcasm

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    This was a pleasant shock to my system. I'm used to the cheesiness that comes with most stories on mibba, but this.....this was great. I don't hate Carmen. She taught Casey a life lesson. It was a shitty one, but it was a lesson nonetheless. The warning was there. Casey chose to ignore it. I don't blame Carmen for her reaction. You live and you learn. This was amazing.
    May 27th, 2016 at 11:44am
  • Nyctophilia.

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    Amazing story wow
    May 3rd, 2016 at 02:38am
  • this.is.bliss.

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    Utterly incredible story. The realism of it all was incredible and I loved how true your characters were. Impeccable job, dear. :)
    June 16th, 2013 at 09:49pm
  • wanderer.

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    This story was fucking ridiculously good! I was so relieved to see that the ending was not a happy one and it was all just a story to show a innocent girls fall from grace. Too often I read stories that finish with a polished happy ending when they shouldn't because it's unrealistic. It's very rare that I read an original fiction as good as that so thank you for you're amazing ability to wright and for sharing this story with us all. Mr. Green
    June 13th, 2013 at 11:31pm
  • Quiescent.

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    DAMN! DAMN! DAMN!!!

    I am so glad I finished this story, I felt emotionally fucked. This is definitely a YA fiction that deserves to be read by everyone. I was on the edge of my seat, I don't even hate Carmen but I do sort of hate Casey. Only because she fucked up Dan.

    Great job, darling. Bravo.
    June 5th, 2013 at 06:44am
  • CyanideSkyline

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    this is beautiful
    May 31st, 2013 at 05:32pm
  • romancingstories

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    Wow... I like how the story is progressing!
    April 29th, 2013 at 02:03am
  • animestars

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    I still have questions. Did she ever recover, move on with life, tell her parents what happened, try to kill herself again, work things out with Dan maybe? I might not get my answers, but just wanted you to know that I have them. P.S. Carmen is a bitch.
    April 26th, 2013 at 04:08am
  • Gemini Beast

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    XD sorry in reading so late :(
    April 26th, 2013 at 03:47am
  • vices

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    WOW.
    THAT WAS A SPECTACULAR ENDING
    AND I KNEW CARMEN WOULD TURN OUT TO BE AN ASSHOLE
    April 26th, 2013 at 02:19am
  • vonhejibergen

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    This was absolutely incredible, and amazing and wow, novel material right there.
    April 26th, 2013 at 01:09am
  • Hello I love you

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    Is that the end? but what happened with dan and stuff?! And does she actually recover? I'm still left with so many questions :(
    April 26th, 2013 at 12:17am
  • darkaly

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    It was great! I'll miss it c:
    April 25th, 2013 at 10:21pm
  • j.lynn

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    Definitely just got the chills!! That was soo good!
    April 25th, 2013 at 10:01pm
  • deactivatedError

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    Oh my god that was amazing!
    April 25th, 2013 at 09:25pm
  • deactivatedError

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    Aww Dan is too sweet :)
    April 25th, 2013 at 12:15pm
  • vices

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    well at least she's fUCKING ADMITTING SHE DID SOME SHIT STUFF
    JFC
    I like Dan
    that is all
    April 25th, 2013 at 04:07am
  • animestars

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    Yeah Dan was very calm. I wonder what he said to her parents. Aside from assisting her with the drugs, I liked him. Update again please xx.
    April 24th, 2013 at 05:42am
  • raAwwrrosaurs

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    I feel like that was some kind of final goodbye to Dan. :/ even though he's an enabler he's the most likable person, he'll be sorely missed if he's gone for good.
    April 23rd, 2013 at 11:35pm
  • Hannah1007700

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    Dan was pretty calm about the situation? o.O Just me? Overall good though :D
    April 23rd, 2013 at 07:24am
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