Hi, I'm from comment swap also. I loved the story, it was nice and simple, but still sweet. I was getting a little teary while reading it. I liked the way it was written as a flashback, and then you got to see the life the narrator was living now as the flashback ended. The vagueness was a little confusing, but it did give the reader room to come up with their own idea of what had happened. Over all, very nice!
January 26th, 2014 at 06:56pm