I like the way you change perspective and the fact that your heroine isn't whiny. You are a talented storyteller and I look forward to reading more. I've seen a lot of redundancy in other fanfiction and your work is quite refreshing. Keep up the good work.
Wow, I think this is wonderful. I must admit, I had my own reservations about reading this. Mainly because when I usually see a story without a layout, I pass it. But I took the chance on reading this and I LOVE it. I guess what they say about NOT judging a book by it's cover is completely accurate. It's written so well, and you capture Daryl's voice perfectly. I'm only halfway through the second chapter, but I'm already in love with Marissa. If you need help with a layout, I'd love to offer assistance! Other than that, please continue updating this!
Aww!!!! Loved it! What is Garyson escaped the Govnor, and made a run for it, but he was beaten up and had a broken arm and a bullet in his shoulder when he escaped and found the prison right when Daryl was leaving the prison for a hunt?