My Dad, My World. - Comments

Wow!! That was intense! My heart was pounding a little while I was reading it! Awesome job!!

@ Robynn9436
Thanks :)

That puppy sounds adorable!!!

I don't have any suggestions for you. This is why I'm not a writer!! If I think of any thing I will let you know.

Update soon please!!

This chapter went from creepy to funny to sweet! Great job!

I liked the way Taylor got a puppy out of Zak. She has him wrapped around her little finger, which is where every girl should keep her dad! LOL!

I'm dying for more!

@ Robynn9436
Im Already working on it! Lol and yea, my Dad Does That And i Thought it was cute lol no Worries, just keep Me hyped! I LOVE getting comments And Stuff so dont leave me hanging!!!!!!!! Lol

@ meredith.rose
Sorry! I forgot to check my e mail for a couple days and the e mail telling me you updated got lost under a bunch of other letters. But I'm glad I found the update cause its awesome! The way Zak whistled when he came in was funny! And Arty is so sweet! Oh and the ending- creepy! I loved it!

More soon please! You have me dying for more (as always!)

@ XxCena--GirlxX
Thanks So Much lol :) keep commenting! I need some pep in my Step to Keep writing This! Lol

@ Robynn9436
I miss my friend commenting :(

Taylor's kicking some demon a$$! LOL

This was another great chapter, but I really liked what Taylor wrote in her journal.

I love this story, a little weird to have Zak in the Dad position but it is amazing. Keep up the work ;)

The chapter where Taylor saw her mom was sweet. And then you went and made things scary. Crying blood? That can't be a good sign! ;)

I'm glad Aaron is better. For a second I thought you might have killed him! LOL!

And there are no typos to confuse me!

I can't wait for more!

@ Robynn9436
Sorry! Sometimes i get ahead of myself and spell alot of things wrong out of excitement. Ill pay more attention this time :) (im doing this on my nook so sometimes ur just going to have to bear with me iff i slip up just a tiny bit :D) thank u so much for helping me! Your making this a better experience for me!

Who does she see?!?!? TELL ME NOW!!!!!!! LOL

I like the angel twist. I wasn't expecting it. Just one thing though. Some if the typos are a little confusing. Maybe try spell check or something? (I don't know what I would do without it! LOL!)

I can't wait to find out who the mystery person is!

@ Robynn9436
Youve been my only source of support! Ubdesearve it lol

You did not just..... You wouldn't really.... Right?? LOL! ;) I'm kinda speechless right now! That was great!

I'm glad I could help you cause this is a great story!

I am DYING to find out what happens next!

I keep hitting the submit button and nothing happens so if this review shows up like six times I apologize.

Aw poor Aaron!

@ meredith.rose
No he's a good character. I like him!

@ Robynn9436
Do u like arty!!!!????? Should i change anything about him?????!!!!!

More pretty please! LOL!

@ Robynn9436
Thanks!!!!!