Lucid Dreaming - Comments

Gosh, this is great!! It did answer my questions. Thank you :-)
Ohh! I think that the pixel thing is either related to or is valery.

I got so bloody excited when it came up as updated. Such a good story, keeps getting better!

I had to check your story out when you commented on mine about your lack of readers - this deserves so many more readers. I hope it picks up! :D

I really like this. Its a great story.
I think that Reece is a nice boy but I think he plays the game too long because in the arcade they can only play an hour.
I dont think anything needs improving.

What happens when a players dies in the game?
Why is it that in the arcade they only allow an hour?
^^^ maybe you could answer by putting it in s chapter? :-)

@ loveupsidedown
Thank you so much for your comment! :)
Chapter 2 has been delayed a little due to personal situations but it should be up in the next couple of days!

This is really good writing. And I love the story line. I'm about to read Chapter one when I have the chance.
It's great so far. I love it already. :)