Primal Instinct - Comments

That was fairly graphic, and abrupt O_O It's amazingly written, but something feels like it could have had more explanation. Back-story, if you will. Other than that, it was fantastic, thank you for writing in :D

Oh wow that was amazing and graphic and i loved it.

@ Synful Cocktail
Why thank you kind maiden, but I disagree this is amazeballs! Haha

@ Nightmare;
Awwwwwww thanks sweetie!
Guuurl, I read your entry, I have A LOT of competition, yours was amazing!

Holy shit this is amazing!!! Like woahhh!! So creative and descriptive and brilliantly written. I'm sat here with my mouth hanging open like I'm catching flies! Haha. I would say good luck in the contest but you definitely don't need it, I'm in the same one, I'm doomed!! Hahaha.

@ Zacky Vengeance;
Sorry for terrifying you baby! ): That sort of was the whole point- but I'm glad that I can write vividly! ACHIEVEMENT UNLOCKED! Hhehehehehe silly Papa Gates, but THANKS BABY! This means a lot, woooooo. Don't worry sweetie pie, I'll protect you from the nasty Zee Zee.

Holy fucking crap...THIS IS SO AMAZING! You actually had me terrified for a moment there, it was all so vivid! There was a dramatic song playing behind me as well, and then Papa Gates came on my iPod and ruined the whole effect. But still...HOLY SHIT WOMAN! This was amazing, Christ I don't want to go near Zacky if that's what he's going to do to me!