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  • GlambertBarakarth

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    That was fairly graphic, and abrupt O_O It's amazingly written, but something feels like it could have had more explanation. Back-story, if you will. Other than that, it was fantastic, thank you for writing in :D
    May 12th, 2013 at 01:35am
  • StacieIerogeance

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    Oh wow that was amazing and graphic and i loved it.
    April 2nd, 2013 at 08:50pm
  • heretic.

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    @ Synful Cocktail
    Why thank you kind maiden, but I disagree this is amazeballs! Haha
    April 2nd, 2013 at 08:44pm
  • Synful Cocktail

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    @ Nightmare;
    Awwwwwww thanks sweetie!
    Guuurl, I read your entry, I have A LOT of competition, yours was amazing!
    April 2nd, 2013 at 08:29pm
  • heretic.

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    Holy shit this is amazing!!! Like woahhh!! So creative and descriptive and brilliantly written. I'm sat here with my mouth hanging open like I'm catching flies! Haha. I would say good luck in the contest but you definitely don't need it, I'm in the same one, I'm doomed!! Hahaha.
    April 2nd, 2013 at 07:04pm
  • Synful Cocktail

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    @ Zacky Vengeance;
    Sorry for terrifying you baby! ): That sort of was the whole point- but I'm glad that I can write vividly! ACHIEVEMENT UNLOCKED! Hhehehehehe silly Papa Gates, but THANKS BABY! This means a lot, woooooo. Don't worry sweetie pie, I'll protect you from the nasty Zee Zee.
    April 2nd, 2013 at 12:05pm
  • Moriarty;

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    Holy fucking crap...THIS IS SO AMAZING! You actually had me terrified for a moment there, it was all so vivid! There was a dramatic song playing behind me as well, and then Papa Gates came on my iPod and ruined the whole effect. But still...HOLY SHIT WOMAN! This was amazing, Christ I don't want to go near Zacky if that's what he's going to do to me!
    April 2nd, 2013 at 12:03pm
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