I have to admit, the way the story started out was quite entertaining, it's told in a light hearted tone as I read it and more comedy then anything which works well with Lacey and the first person's point of view. It's a cute story so far and for a fan fiction it works well, so keep on writing and having fun for sure :-) it's a fun story.
Thank you so much! You wouldn't believe how much that means to me.