@ xXxMCRsavedmexXx Shit, this is really embarrassing - I have an edited and an unedited version (don't ask why they're in different places) and I uploaded the wrong one! Thanks for the heads up as I wouldn't have even noticed if not
There are several things I love about this story, for example, the fact that you've started straight away instead of having introductory segments or a long descriptive opening, also that everything flows and makes sense, you haven't forgotten little details and are progressing the story well. You seem to be having difficulties with the code for italics (though you nearly got it) to make italics you use [i ]this[/i ] but with no spaces. You also might want to go through the two chapters you've posted and reread them as there are a few mistakes and errors like wrong word or punctuation and missing letters. However, amazing update, I'm definitely interested in this story, vampires included. Can't wait for more!
@ xXxMCRsavedmexXx I'm actually half a second away from uploading... And glad you like this so much! Pleased to know it's enjoyable, even if, you know, vampires.
I'm not one for stories including anything about vampires, however, I gave this a chance and I'm glad I did. I have never read something like this! I'm absolutely hooked and thoroughly intrigued to find out how this story progresses. Amazing start, I definitely cannot wait for more! Please update soon?! :D