This was rather interesting. I like that Bryn and Louis have a friends with benefits relationship going on so it seems and Bryn has fallen for him. Her determination to tell him and not just give into his carnal desires was a nice start. I think you showed her anxiety over confessing her feelings to him very well in the little fidgeting motions of hers. I also liked that he was oblivious and thought she meant he was physically hurting her when they hooked up.
The ending was very sweet. It was cute that he promised to stay with her and all her nervousness and worries about how he'd react were for nothing. This was a lovely one-shot.
The ending was very sweet. It was cute that he promised to stay with her and all her nervousness and worries about how he'd react were for nothing. This was a lovely one-shot.