I Am Your Godsend, I Am Your Savior, I Am the Red Dripping From Your Lips - Comments

Finish it please :)

Finish it please!

I want you to finish it

Okay, I'm not quite sure if this is a fanfiction or original fiction, because if it is a fanfiction, I'm not entirely sure on who the famous people are. No worries though.

Your layout was a bit hard to read, the font was a bit too dark for my eyes and I had to squint to read. The picture on the side is a bit distracting, but hey, to each their own.
I saw a few mistakes, such as in the second chapter,
"I'm sorry" Her breaking words surprised me.
There should be a comma after the word sorry.
Like this: "I'm sorry," Her breaking words surprised me. You see?
I noticed it a few more times but it's nothing too bad, I did it myself when I first began writing.

I think you've done a good job overall. c:

@ PlightOfSins
no no winky face! Updateeee pleaseeeee

@ Flood
;)

UPDATEIPDATEUPDATE NOW WOMAN DONT LEAVE US HANGING

No! Dont just leave me with that!! NEED MORE!

No! Dont just leave me with that!! NEED MORE!

oh my god, She got an abortion?! oh no.
Update asap cant wait to see what happens.

WHO'S IS IT?
its not Kuza's he was on tour wasn't hee?

OMG UPDATE PLEASE I NEED TO KNOW!!!!!!!! DONT FUCK WITH ME WOMAN!! :)

@ Flood
Maybe ;)

@ foREVer-a-creature
I'll try and end this story this week. Don't pull your hair out!

Gahh! I am going to end up pulling my hair out because of all the suspense!!

I bet your sitting behind your computer laughing at us. This is suspense frustration.

I want to smack you I wanna knowwww DX

I think I wanna torture you for all this torture.

I need to know.... the suspense is killing me!!!

ok god damn it. j ust come out with it lol. I need to know. its bugging me.

Suspense....GHAAAHHHHHHH!!!!