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  • Roxz

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    @ staynegativebabe
    Her name is Erica Dasher :)
    August 26th, 2015 at 09:44pm
  • staynegativebabe

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    @ Roxz
    yea
    August 26th, 2015 at 06:57pm
  • staynegativebabe

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    @ Roxz
    yea
    August 26th, 2015 at 06:55pm
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    @ staynegativebabe
    Do you mean the girl in the trailers I made?
    August 25th, 2015 at 06:13pm
  • staynegativebabe

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    who's the girl hat plays ava Smile
    August 25th, 2015 at 05:51pm
  • Erin.Grace.

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    That moment when I realize its you who wrote this lolol
    I honestly jad no idea! Goes to show I like anythin you write apparently
    May 14th, 2015 at 12:29pm
  • Erin.Grace.

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    That moment when I realize its you who wrote this lolol
    I honestly jad no idea! Goes to show I like anythin you write apparently
    May 14th, 2015 at 12:27pm
  • Erin.Grace.

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    holy fuck, did not see this coming
    Holy shit! I cant wait for the next update
    Like seriously I wish I had more to say but Holy Fuck is basically the only thing on repeat in my head right now
    shit man, Cliff hanger like no other
    April 7th, 2015 at 12:26am
  • CatchingDreams

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    I DO I DO I WANT TO KNOW HIS SECRET!!!!!
    November 25th, 2014 at 01:30am
  • purplew4ve

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    i feel like things are gonna blow up but idec at the moment because that kiss was sooooooooooooooo damn cute yay
    April 21st, 2014 at 09:13am
  • Risen

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    AHHH MY GOODNESS!! Such Drammmmaaaa in this chapter! Loved it, and now I'm wondering how on Earth there is only 12 comments (well now 13...) on this wonderful story?!?!?!?? You are doing beautifully on this, it truly is the perfect balance of everything grand stories are made of.
    Beautiful. I can't say it enough.
    Thank you for writing, and please don't ever stop.
    April 21st, 2014 at 04:40am
  • PurpleDream16

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    Wait! Whoa, what is in the DVD he's keeping hidden?! Oh, trip, is that more important than Ava?
    April 21st, 2014 at 02:09am
  • CatchingDreams

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    WHATTTT
    That's a crazy new chapter!! SO DRAMATIC
    AHMAHGAHD I cant wait to find out what happens!!
    April 21st, 2014 at 01:13am
  • afhaolbhig

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    Awesome new chapter! I love seeing your updates :) Cant wait for more
    February 14th, 2014 at 06:22pm
  • CatchingDreams

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    Yay new update!!! Brightens up my holiday :D Also, im really intrigued to find out what happens next....... ;)
    January 1st, 2014 at 11:57pm
  • CatchingDreams

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    LOVE the latest chapter ;) glad to see you're finally updating!
    December 27th, 2013 at 08:14pm
  • Risen

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    I've always been the silent reader on here but I'm finally gathering enough courage to comment on things... bare with me... But this is amazing!!!! The everything, the ups and downs, the little insight to their minds is perfect. Oh and that lollipop.... goodness so sweet but getting to their physical attraction they have for each other... its an amazing balance. So thank you for writing and sharing this amazing piece of work
    December 27th, 2013 at 06:36pm
  • afhaolbhig

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    Love reading your story, keep up the great work! I am always looking for updates :)
    October 17th, 2013 at 08:00am
  • StargazingLover

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    Ahh I'm in love with this!! I really wanna know what's up with Thomas and his huge secret!
    August 4th, 2013 at 10:13am
  • CatchingDreams

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    I'm really loving the new chapter!! Sorry I haven't been posting comments much, ive been using internet cafes :P I love how their relationship is prgressing.... its so cute!!! :D
    July 30th, 2013 at 06:15pm
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