Shake the Chains and Wake the Demon - Comments

Finally a chaptered Jimohnny I actually like! This is my favorite pairing and there just isn't enough of it on Mibba.

But holy crap, I love this so much. Let me start with the scene where they stole the beer from the gas station. To me it was actually really funny, and I had a feeling Johnny would end up more involved than he wanted to be! And when they played 'Never Have I Ever' I was a little disappointed that they stopped, but it's totally understandable what with Johnny's bruises and all.

Their first time was so cute, and I loved that Jimmy was so patient! It made it seem more real. The two of them are just so frigging cute together, and it's also really adorable that Jimmy's mom bought Johnny a toothbrush, I dunno why.

Well I dunno if this story is still active or not, but I really hope it is, cause I'm in love with it!

This was amazing and I can't wait for another chapter. They're so cute together I just can't even. :D

Been hunting for a well written Avenged Sevenfold fic for a long time, and I'm so glad I found this one. Sure, there are some punctuation and spelling mistakes, but everyone has that. No big deal. I love your use of imagery and how you portray the characters. I can hear Brian and Jimmy in my head. I hope you continue this story. Best story I've read in a while. Great job!

Yes thank you I think this is the first fic I've read that is so accurate yay
Ugh I love this story so muchhhhh the world needs more good Jimohnny like this cx

You are so damn right, about the awkwardness. I don't usually see good written first time sex often as well, especially about teens, but this one was really good. And they are so fucking cute together! :) so, keep up the good work :)

N'awww!! I kinda teared up a little when Johnny took off his hoodie in front of the guys.

I love this story so much. Update as soon as possible? :)

update please!

Your updates are always amazing! I can't wait for his past!!!

Oh my god I am so ready for everything in this story, it's so perfect!

Please update as soon as possible pleeeease?

Can you please update soon? Pretty please? This is an amazing story and I want more!! :D

Holy shit. I love this! I NEED to know what happened with Jimmy and the other boy, though. Please tell us? *puppy dog face* I wonder it the kid that rammed into the car earlier was that boy? I dont know. That would be interesting.

Also, please don't make Jimmy TOO dominant. I can't imagine him being mean or dismissive of other's feelings. It would be so weird.

Anyway, I love your writing. It's really good and easy to follow. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE???!

Thank you! Haha!
I wonder what happened behind closed doors of Jimmy's and the other boy's relationship...

More please!! :D

I cant wait for more : D:D

It's all so cute and perf and ugh I love cx

Awwww so :D o cute! PLEASE UPDATE

Omfg that is the cutest bunch of chapters ever. I love the fact that Jimmy saved Johnny. Uhhh I feel some adorable romance coming on ^.^

I was smiling so hard it hurt!! The latest update was pretty heart-warming too...

Aw! Crying Jimmy! :(