August 9th, 2014 at 06:02am
Shake the Chains and Wake the Demon - Comments
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This was amazing and I can't wait for another chapter. They're so cute together I just can't even. :DFebruary 17th, 2014 at 04:34am
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Been hunting for a well written Avenged Sevenfold fic for a long time, and I'm so glad I found this one. Sure, there are some punctuation and spelling mistakes, but everyone has that. No big deal. I love your use of imagery and how you portray the characters. I can hear Brian and Jimmy in my head. I hope you continue this story. Best story I've read in a while. Great job!February 10th, 2014 at 08:24am
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Yes thank you I think this is the first fic I've read that is so accurate yay
Ugh I love this story so muchhhhh the world needs more good Jimohnny like this cxJanuary 23rd, 2014 at 03:45am -
You are so damn right, about the awkwardness. I don't usually see good written first time sex often as well, especially about teens, but this one was really good. And they are so fucking cute together! :) so, keep up the good work :)January 22nd, 2014 at 07:10pm
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N'awww!! I kinda teared up a little when Johnny took off his hoodie in front of the guys.January 4th, 2014 at 03:07am
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I love this story so much. Update as soon as possible? :)November 30th, 2013 at 09:58pm
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update please!November 26th, 2013 at 09:21pm
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Your updates are always amazing! I can't wait for his past!!!November 25th, 2013 at 05:21am
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Oh my god I am so ready for everything in this story, it's so perfect!
Please update as soon as possible pleeeease?November 24th, 2013 at 01:24am -
Can you please update soon? Pretty please? This is an amazing story and I want more!! :DNovember 10th, 2013 at 11:15pm
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Holy shit. I love this! I NEED to know what happened with Jimmy and the other boy, though. Please tell us? *puppy dog face* I wonder it the kid that rammed into the car earlier was that boy? I dont know. That would be interesting.
Also, please don't make Jimmy TOO dominant. I can't imagine him being mean or dismissive of other's feelings. It would be so weird.
Anyway, I love your writing. It's really good and easy to follow. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE???!
November 5th, 2013 at 03:15am -
Thank you! Haha!
I wonder what happened behind closed doors of Jimmy's and the other boy's relationship...November 4th, 2013 at 07:59am -
More please!! :DOctober 19th, 2013 at 05:27am
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I cant wait for more : D:DOctober 14th, 2013 at 05:30am
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It's all so cute and perf and ugh I love cxOctober 14th, 2013 at 01:59am
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Awwww so :D o cute! PLEASE UPDATEJune 20th, 2013 at 07:03am
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Omfg that is the cutest bunch of chapters ever. I love the fact that Jimmy saved Johnny. Uhhh I feel some adorable romance coming on ^.^June 17th, 2013 at 09:16pm
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I was smiling so hard it hurt!! The latest update was pretty heart-warming too...May 21st, 2013 at 11:32pm
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Aw! Crying Jimmy! :(May 20th, 2013 at 04:21am
But holy crap, I love this so much. Let me start with the scene where they stole the beer from the gas station. To me it was actually really funny, and I had a feeling Johnny would end up more involved than he wanted to be! And when they played 'Never Have I Ever' I was a little disappointed that they stopped, but it's totally understandable what with Johnny's bruises and all.
Their first time was so cute, and I loved that Jimmy was so patient! It made it seem more real. The two of them are just so frigging cute together, and it's also really adorable that Jimmy's mom bought Johnny a toothbrush, I dunno why.
Well I dunno if this story is still active or not, but I really hope it is, cause I'm in love with it!