Feel This Moment - Comments

She's opening up! Yay! :) wonder what Brian has to say though...

@ ToBeDetermined
I love the dynamic I set up between Ellie and Collin! He's sort of like her older and wiser brother, who's just looking out for her! Ellie's got to learn that not everything is doom and gloom, and Matt's there to help her with that (: Thanks for the comment love!

I'm so glad that Matt and Ellie finally hung out. She's at least trying to be open to being around someone else and maybe even trust him. She's also craving to be a part of society again or at least in good company. She likes being around Collin and when Matt leaves she doesn't want him to go. I take that as a sign that she's getting a bit better.

Matt is quite adorable when he insists on getting her another coffee. I just felt bad for Ellie because the more he talked the more panicked she became. Thank the heavens above that Collin was there to help Matt understand a bit better and helping him get on her good side.

@ xerinxelizabethx17
Thanks! I didn't make the layout I found it in Mibba's huge list of them ^^ I'm glad you enjoy it!

First off- love the banner, i like the colors and how you did the layout, very nice! the first chapter is super good. it totally drew me in and i was like what the hell is going on i want to know! you did a good job leaving it as a cliff hanger because now i have to go on to the other chapters haha, i'm a sucker for cliff hangers, their the death of me sometimes. Great job! <3

@ Heaven_syn_gates
LOL! Yeah but we know why they can't be together. or can they? ;)

somebody got the hots 4 baby face matt oo lala

@ Alcohol and Shame
Thank you 4 thinking so

@ Heaven_syn_gates
Awh honey x it'll get better I promise. Glad you like it!

awesome update had to read this because my brother touched my arm and i freaked out so now i have isolated myself from everybody i feel so ashamed.Also i like the new layout

@ ToBeDetermined
@ angelbyyourside

Thanks you two! it means a lot to me x I'm so glad Comment Swap did it's thing <3

I must thank Comment Swap for bringing me here. I feel so sad about Matt and his sister's home life. But I like that growing up that way gave him a sixth sense about Ellie. I just hope that she trusts him enough to let him in.

This story is going to be amazing. I can just feel it.

No apologies needed--we all have to understand why Matt knew the signs. :) looking forward to another update! :)

@ angelbyyourside
Thank you! x Working on another chapter as we speak! [err.. type!]

Feels like another good story up ahead. :) I hope you update soon.

@ Chopper-kun
Thanks love! Means a lot to me x Working on a new chapter right now! I promise I'll be writing more/longer chapters, because there's a bit of development that needs to be explained so that aught to make it longer ^^

This is cool.

I already like this Ellie character and Matt, well, of course I love Matt. Who doesn't? ~(^_^)~

Anyways, your writing is good and I don't notice any grammar mistakes. However, I do think your chapter is too short for my liking. But it's just because I love reading long chapters because I think it's more satisfactory, I guess.

But this is a promising story and it leaves me wanting more. I'm definitely subscribing.

@ Heaven_syn_gates
Thanks for the comment, love! I know all about phobias; I used to suffer from it too. I'm so proud you're over-coming it! Just keep working on it xo

NOBODY COMMENTED HAHA IAM THE 1ST ONE I LOVE IT THIS IS WEIRD BECAUSE I HAVE HAPTEPHOBIA BUT IAM OVERCOMING IT